Sunday, February 11, 2007

incomplete

going insane

this is not what i wished
this is not what i thought

you will not have me any more

I am going insane
through all this pain
i've started lying
to get over again

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Update on 8th dec 2007.
Well , okay this is how I write a song... after going thro another bit of my incomplete songs, , i felt i can add on top to this lyrics...

still it is far far away from being called a song...

no matter how hard i try
no matter what i ever wish
i could nt read your mind
i dont know what you want...

i tried to follow your actions
i tried to follw what you say

this is not what i wished
this is not what i thought
you will not have me any more

I am going insane
through all this pain
i've started lying
to get over again

this is not what i wished for
this is not what i thought of
you will not have me any more


hmm,, i want someone to compose music for my songs....
wish one day i will hear my songs in tv....


========== more revisions of this song to follow...

4 comments:

Unknown said...

hey praveen... itz cool ya...
itz like writing from heart....
keep goin....

cheers
Anu

Siddarth said...

gud ones..
Visit mine@thebuddingpoet.blogspot.com

Vizz said...

nice dude. keep it going on.

Anonymous said...

Its crazy how you're leaving me scarred
Its crazy girl wherever you are
You stole my heart

(Jay Sean)